Friday, January 19, 2018

Week 2 Story: The Clever Cat and the Bird

     A community of mice lived happily in the walls of a house with a perfect sized hole in the corner of the kitchen under the cupboard. The hole allowed the mice to sneak out and grab food whenever no one was around. The community began to grow too large and was eager to come out more often to gather enough food for everyone. One of the mice who had been starving for days could not wait any longer and ran out without checking to see if the coast was clear but unfortunately ran into the mom as she was getting ready to prepare breakfast. She screamed and the mouse ran with fright back into the hole.
     The next day, the hole had been covered by the husband and the mice could no longer sneak into the house for food. The neighbor’s cat next door lingered on the fence and saw the mice dreadfully leave the house looking for a new place to stay. The cat thought about attacking the mice by sneaking up on them but the cat could only gain at most two mice by surprise which would not satisfy his appetite. He quickly devised a plan and hoped his acting would be up to par. The cat exclaimed, “I know where you can have an endless source of food if you will let me take you there.” The mice looked at each other skeptical of the cat’s offer. One mouse replied, “How can we trust a cat when we have been hunted by cats our whole lives?” The cat responded, “Well if you don’t want the food, I am fine with eating it all myself.” The mice were desperate for food and made a plan to let the cat take one mouse and show that mouse the place with a so called “endless” food source so that the mouse could come back and tell the community if the cat was lying or not. The cat let the mouse climb on his back and then the cat swiftly snuck the mouse over the fence and into his owner’s house. The cat fed the mouse an abundance of food and then took the mouse back to the community. The mouse went on and on about how content he was from all of the food he had and how there was so much food left waiting to be eaten. The mice all fought to be the next one to go with the cat to the neighbor’s house. The cat took each mouse one by one and ate them as soon as he was out of sight of the other mice. Eventually there were no more mice to eat and the cat grew hungry again.
  The cat saw out of the corner of his eye a bird on a nearby bench. He made the same offer to the bird as he did to the mice. The bird was smarter than the whole community combined. The bird agreed but on one condition, that the cat let the bird stand on the cat’s head so that the bird could see where they were going. The cat went over the fence and into the house where a tall stack of small bones were piled. The cat thought he was clever and could eat the bird as he did with all of the other mice but before he could capture the bird, the bird in the perfect position pecked at both of his eyes and flew away. The cat was not able to kill another mouse again.


A Cat and a Bird: The Dodo

Bibliography. "The Cunning Crane and the Crab" from The Giant Crab, and Other Tales from Old India by W. H. D. Rouse with illustrations by W. Robinson, web source

Author's note: The original story is about a crane that convinces fish who are living in a dried out pond to come to a fresh new pond with abundant resources on the other side but at the cost of their lives as the crane eats them one by one while carrying them in his beak over to the other side. However, a crab outsmarts the crane and convinces the crane to allow the crab to hold onto the crane's neck. The crane tries to trick the crab like the others but the crab had the upper hand and clipped the crane's head off. I replaced the crane, fish, and crab with a cat, mice, and bird respectively. I switched out the characters to provide another scenario where a trickster  could get tricked because those are my favorite types of stories so I didn't want to change the actual plot of the story. 

3 comments:

  1. Hi Rosa! I enjoyed reading your story. I really liked the tale "The Cunning Crab and the Crane" so it was cool to hear it from a different perspective. At first when I was reading it, it reminded me of the Disney movie Ratatouille. That picture you found to go with your story is perfect! I look forward to reading some more of your stories!

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  2. I really enjoy your story and it was fun. I did not read the "The Cunning Crab and the Crane" so I was not what really happen in that story. After reading your story I can see that the story is similar to the one you wrote. The part where cat was looking at mice coming out of house was similar part of Tom and Jerry, I was curious to see what would happen in your story on cat and mice. It made me think that this story might be same as Tom and Jerry but I didn't expect the turnout of the story like this. I wonder if you had similar story of Tom and Jerry, where cat try to get mice but it doesn't expect the way cat wants. If you hadn’t mention the bird in this story and kept it based on mice than the name of you story would have been “The Clever Cat and the Bird". Even though I like this type of story too.

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  3. Hey Rosa! This was such a fun twist on the story. I was really impressed with your idea to change the animal species that were included in the story. What other kinds of animals would this story work for? I was a little confused about how the cat ate the entire community of mice seemingly in one day. Could there be a way for the cat to devise a plan that would enable it to make his food source last longer? It could also be cool to make the bird vengeful, as if he saw the atrocity that the cat was committing by eating all the mice and was just waiting for his opportunity to get justice for the helpless mice. There could be a whole backstory about how the bird and the mice were friends, maybe the bird could even be a pet that lived in the house the mice previously occupied.

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